Mirra · October 2026 paid batch · Session 1 (generated)
Mirra October ads: review board
Click any image to open it full size. Every Chinese line on an ad is listed with its English meaning. Reply in chat with approve / reject / changes per ad. Updated 7 Oct 2026, 19:24 MYT.
S5 v2c (current). All six cells are Mirra's own menu photos, placed in pixel for pixel; codex drew only the header and grid.Reference: the competitor ad whose layout this copies (Factor)v1, rejected: codex invented cell 6 (egg-like rolls, not Mei Cai Fried Rice) and clipped the headline
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
六个午餐，
Six lunches,
全都低于 500 卡
all under 500 cal
撑到晚餐
Full till dinner
RM19++ 起一餐
From RM19++ a meal
G7 audit: 8.6/10 · NOTES (Claude judge; Gemini quota used up today) (bar 9.5)
Bottom row is cut off by the frame edge. That is the competitor layout's own design, but the judge marks it down.
The six photos have different colour casts (pink cloth, yellow wood, cool grey).
The MIRRA wordmark doesn't line up with anything.
Cells left to right, top to bottom: Mapo Tofu Rice · Jap Chae · Dry Classic Curry Konjac Noodle · Spicy Fusilli Pasta · Ginger Beancurd Seaweed Rice · Mei Cai Fried Rice.
The comma after 六个午餐 came out as a Latin comma, not the Chinese one.
Your call: Keep the cut-off bottom row (the reference's look), or make both rows full height? And may I give the six photos one shared warm grade so they match?
S4 · Lunch under 500 cal, no cooking needed (offer card)
S4 v2c (current): smaller card, upright quote, gift chip on its own line. The bento is still codex's redraw of the real photo.The real Mirra photo it should match (Fusilli Bolognese)v1 (G7 7.8, rejected): italic quote, crowded cardReference: the competitor ad whose layout this copies (Planthood)
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
午餐低于 500 卡，
Lunch under 500 cal,
不用自己下厨
no cooking needed
回到职场，午餐交给 Mirra
Back at work, leave lunch to Mirra
RM19++ 起一餐
From RM19++ a meal
低于 500 卡
Under 500 cal (pill)
订 20 / 40 餐送礼物
A gift with 20 or 40-meal plans
免费配送到指定地区
Free delivery to selected areas
WhatsApp 下单
Order on WhatsApp
「try了很多这种订餐的，Mirra是唯一让我继续订的 👍👍」
"I've tried a lot of these meal-order services; Mirra is the only one I kept ordering" (a real customer's WhatsApp, your pick C)
—— Mirra 老顾客
— a Mirra regular
The 低于 500 卡 (under 500 cal) pill stays: your standing rule is a pill on every ad.
The comma after 500 卡 still comes out as a Latin comma; codex ignores the request.
Your call: The true pixel edit that keeps the real photo (about US$0.17) was refused: the OpenAI API account has no credits left (nothing was charged). Top up the OpenAI credits and I'll run it, or approve v2c with the redrawn food.
S7 · Same girl, same office, new lunch (illustrated before/now)
Being fixed
Static 9:16 1080x1920 (+ a 4:5 crop) · built on Mirra's own past winner S19 · illustration, not a customer photo · ad_id mir-ad-20261007-007
S7 v2 (current, being fixed): the two dish tiles are Mirra's own photos (Mapo Tofu Rice, Fusilli Bolognese)Reference: Mirra's own S19 winner this refreshes
Reel 9:16 · 30 s · Wan 3.0 · the real closed Mirra box is the only reference · ad_id mir-ad-20261005-001
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
低于五百卡的午餐，一餐要四十几块吧？
An under-500-calorie lunch must be forty-something ringgit a meal?
不用。
No.
那三十几块？
Thirty-something, then?
也不用。
No, not that either.
那要多少？
So how much?
二十几块就可以。
Twenty-something ringgit does it.
约朋友、同事一起订，更便宜。
Order with friends or colleagues and it's cheaper.
这是 Mirra 的午餐，每一餐低于五百卡，营养师和厨师设计。
This is Mirra's lunch. Every meal is under 500 cal, designed by a nutritionist and a chef.
我们用椰菜花饭、糙米、藜麦，不用便宜的白米饭，意大利面也没漂白。
We use cauliflower rice, brown rice and quinoa, not cheap white rice, and the pasta is unbleached.
OUG 附近指定地区免费送，订二十、四十餐还送礼物。
Free delivery to selected areas near OUG, and a gift with 20 or 40 meals.
……点下面，WhatsApp 我们。
... tap below and WhatsApp us.
Changed for your RM19++ ruling: the friends line no longer says 'as low as seventeen-something'; it now says 'order with friends or colleagues and it's cheaper' (Jev agreed in both orders).
Your call: GO to fire? One paid fire, about US$3.00 list (Higgsfield Wan, US$0.10/s).
P2 · Salesperson offer list (Wan reel script, not yet fired)
Needs your review
Reel 9:16 · 30 s · Wan 3.0 · the real closed Mirra box is the only reference · ad_id mir-ad-20261005-002
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
听好，Mirra 午餐有优惠。
Listen up, Mirra lunch has a deal.
一，约同事一起订，更划算。
One, order with your colleagues, it costs less.
二，二十餐、四十餐送礼物。
Two, a gift with 20 or 40 meals.
三，指定地区免费送。
Three, free delivery to selected areas.
天天烦午餐吃什么的朋友，刷到这条视频，这次不要错过。
If lunch is a daily headache for you and this video found you, don't miss this one.
这是 Mirra 午餐，每一餐低于五百卡，营养师和厨师设计。
This is Mirra lunch. Every meal is under 500 cal, designed by a nutritionist and a chef.
每天早上新鲜煮好，送到你的办公室，菜单天天换，打开就能吃。
Cooked fresh every morning, delivered to your office, a new menu every day, ready to eat.
一个人订也可以，约同事一起订更划算。
You can order on your own, but it costs less with your colleagues.
想要的话，……点下面，马上 WhatsApp 我们。
If you want it ... tap below and WhatsApp us now.
Your call: GO to fire? One paid fire, about US$3.00 list (Higgsfield Wan, US$0.10/s).
P3 · New 7 s hook spliced onto P1's body (Wan reel script, not yet fired)
Needs your review
Reel 9:16 · 7 s hook · Wan 3.0 · the real closed Mirra box is the only reference · ad_id mir-ad-20261005-003
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
中午吃什么，还要想半天？
Still spending ages deciding on lunch?
现在 Mirra 有优惠，
Mirra has a promotion on now,
我同事跟你讲。
my colleague will tell you.
Fires only after P1 is approved: its body is P1's take.
Your call: GO to fire? One paid fire, about US$0.70 list (Higgsfield Wan, US$0.10/s).
Reel 9:16 · one 26 s Wan take + real dish photos and end card in the edit · generated women · ad_id mir-ad-20261007-026
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
哇，你午餐就吃这个啊？全部水煮菜？
Wow, this is your lunch? All boiled vegetables?
我想吃轻一点。
I wanted something lighter.
轻一点，也不用吃成这样。每一餐低于五百卡。
Lighter, sure, but you don't have to eat like this. Every meal is under 500 cal.
营养师和厨师设计，每天早上新鲜煮好。
Designed by a nutritionist and a chef, cooked fresh every morning.
……明天帮我也订一份。
...order me one too tomorrow.
午餐轻一点，也可以好好吃
End card: A lighter lunch can still be a good one
RM19++ 起一餐 · 订 20 / 40 餐送礼物 · 免费配送到指定地区
End-card chips: from RM19++ a meal · gift with 20/40 meals · free delivery to selected areas
The lid lifts toward the lens and the edit cuts to the real Mirra photo; open food is never generated.
Pace 1.5–3.0 syllables per second, every line checked.
Your call: GO to fire? One paid fire, about US$2.60 list.
R10 · Pantry skit, 'order with me' (Wan reel script, not yet fired)
Needs your review
Reel 9:16 · one 26 s Wan take + real dish photos and end card in the edit · generated women · ad_id mir-ad-20261007-027
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
最近都没看你去打包了，中午吃什么？
No tapau run for you lately. What's for lunch, then?
我改订 Mirra 了，每天送到办公室。
I switched to Mirra. It comes to the office every day.
这个好吃吗？
Is this good?
你试一口。
Here, have a bite.
约我一起订，每一餐更划算。
Order with me, every meal costs less.
好，算我一份。
OK, count me in.
约同事一起订 · RM19++ 起一餐
End card: order with colleagues · from RM19++ a meal
Her colleague's bite is silent: no taste verdict from a generated person.
Your call: One line to confirm: in 'I switched to Mirra' a generated woman speaks as a Mirra user (no result claimed). The signed brief depends on it. OK to keep? Then GO to fire (about US$2.60).
R11 · Bloated after lunch → same trousers, looser (Wan reel, A and B, not yet fired)
Needs your review
Reel 9:16 · 30 s · narrator only: the generated woman never speaks · uses the R11 before/after stills above · ad_id mir-ad-20261007-028 (A) · mir-ad-20261007-029 (B)
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
午餐一吃完，就好胀。
Narrator: Right after lunch, so bloated.
每天打包重口味，热量也不知道多少。
Narrator: Heavy-flavoured tapau every day, and who knows the calories.
换成 Mirra，每一餐低于五百卡。
Narrator: Switch to Mirra, every meal under 500 cal.
同一条裤子，松了
Caption: Same pants, looser now
营养师和厨师设计，每天早上新鲜煮好。
Narrator: Designed by a nutritionist and a chef, cooked fresh every morning.
点下面，WhatsApp 我们。
Narrator: Tap below and WhatsApp us.
Wan fires: B1 opening from each version's before still (3 s each), one shared tapau + closed-box take (10 s), the before→after shot for A and B (4 s each). The change happens while her palm covers the lens, so nothing morphs on screen.
Narrator voice is a separate step (ElevenLabs or Wan voice).
Your call: Approve the R11 stills above, then GO for the five Wan fires (about US$2.40 total)?
R1 · Pantry skit + real kitchen footage (Wan reel script) — two lines held
Needs your review
Reel 9:16 · ~42 s · a 15 s Wan skit (generated women) + real order-surge, kitchen and scoop footage + narrator · ad_id mir-ad-20261007-012
On the image (Chinese)
Meaning (English)
又是一大盒杂饭？
Another heavy tapau lunch?
每次吃完，都觉得好重
Every time, it sits heavy.
换这个试试
Try this instead.
怎么订？
How do I order?
完全不油腻
Not greasy at all. ← held: reads as a testimonial from a generated person
每一份都吃得饱饱的
Every portion fills you right up. ← held: same reason
分量足
A generous portion. (borderline; staged as weighing the closed box, never after eating)
Your rule: generated people never speak as customers. Jev scored the two held lines 0.70–0.76 as testimonial-like (control lines 0.05–0.23).
Your call: Fire R1 as written (US$1.50), or the version without the two held lines (US$1.10)?
Everything else in Session 1's queue
Ad
What
Status
Waiting on
S7
Same girl, same office, new lunch (illustrated split)
v3 fixing the safe zone now (card above)
—
C1 + twin
4-card carousel, under 500 cal not a shake + single-image twin
Being built now
—
C2 + control
4-card offer-stack carousel + single-image control
Being built now
Photo registration PR (doesn't block the stills)
S1
Sticky note on the pack: 'cheaper than your daily Grab'
Waiting
The Grab claim confirmed at RM19++
S2 · S3 · S6
Statics built on real photos
Waiting
The real photos (desk, tapau, the customer's own photo with consent)
